Dec 17 2012

Johns father had beaten him for as long as he could remember, and when he got old enough John paid for his father to be killed. but this story bores me because i dont believe that John should have to follow the narrative imperative of describing or proving his fallibility worthy of redemption, like Pip in Great Expectations for example and i almost dont think abused children should be held accountable. therefore it being within my power i simply remove the abuser from the world of this story as never having existed. John grew up in a regular household and lived a normal happy life.

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